Week 1 Pitches version 2

Here's the second draft of my Pitch One Pager. I changed the text to be more detailed about what the game mechanics consist of. Upon further thinking there might be more updates to come on this before I have to present it to the class.

Version 2

Week 1 Pitches

I have decided since this is a Blog that is going to record my Game Development Process, It is going to start at the beginning with the idea process and the Pitches of games.

I started out with a puzzle game that included Wombats and their natural tendencies to hide and burrow. This was an okay idea in my head but the more I discussed it with others it just didn't have the feel I wanted for my pitch idea. 

I decided to continue with some of my other half concocted ideas. So I worked out the idea for this game: Requiem of Dreams. 

Ta Da

You take the role of a demon with a nasty looking hook (note Dota pudge cobble art) that is out to destroy the Dreams of the world. He is to be stopped by the Sandman, but we can't allow good to win this time.
You make your way into the dreams of people and lay waste to everything dream sight causing terror and havoc through villages, city, and nations.
I envision this game as either a 3d 3rd person view game or as a 2D platformer like game. Some things that I'm excited for is the hook mechanic that can add challenge and fun to the game.
Some parts of the game that I have not put a firm choice on is how the sandman is trying to stop you. It could be himself or he could send minions. The win condition of the game is something I have not made a choice on.